Discussão The Walking Dead

You wake up in a coma. Everything around you is destroyed. The life support machine is in-operation and you're dehydrated, confused and a bit delirious. "Where is everyone?" You wonder. "Is this a dream, am I in a nightmare?" You continue to ponder. You get out of bed, ceiling lights are hanging down, there is no power in the building, clutter everywhere, and you hear sounds but can't tell if they are real or in your head.

You get out of bed, search for your clothes but only find a pair of jeans, some work boots and flannel shirt and some socks in another room. The clothes fit loosely, but they will have to do. You put them on and begin to wonder around the hallways. There isn't anyone around? “What is going on, did the world end while I was asleep?” You wonder. You say, "hello?" Quietly at first, but a little louder the second and third time around. You hear shuffling in the hallways but when you peek your head out, you see no one. You’re still not sure if the sounds are only in your head. Walking through the hallways, the lights are hanging from the ceiling, not even flickering; there is clutter and dismay all around you. You hear some noises coming from the hallway behind you as you walk up to a sign that says, “Exit” and points to a direction. You hear something behind you and when you turn around, you thought you saw half a body crawling, but couldn’t be sure if what you saw was real or in your head. You wonder if you should check it out or leave the hospital.

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Dead links.

@The End said:

Dead links.

Worked for me. Not sure why you can't navigate through the story.

Maybe cached or something? They don't go anywhere for me.

Are you using a phone or computer?

Looks like it works on my PalmPilot. Poorly written, but thanks!

Was your review of my story: Poorly Written?

If so, what could be better. I have two more others I'm working on. If you give me constructive criticism, I can improve the other two.

Could be truer to the source material. I didn't like that Ed was depicted as the levelheaded member of the group.

@The End said:

Could be truer to the source material. I didn't like that Ed was depicted as the levelheaded member of the group.

But he was.

@LastLion said:

@The End said:

Could be truer to the source material. I didn't like that Ed was depicted as the levelheaded member of the group.

But he was.

metal_tone5

I got lost and ended up stuck here.

The Fence

No way I was gonna be able to get through that.

@HogieHero4lyfe said:

I got lost and ended up stuck here.

The Fence

No way I was gonna be able to get through that.

Lol, you dick.

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